My teacher asked us to write about our favorite wild animal and its habitat. I wrote about an elephant and how it lives in savannas and forests. I also mentioned that they are very smart and have big ears. But then, I thought, 'What else can I add to make my writing better and more personal?' I remembered seeing a video where elephants showed great care for their young. I should definitely add that! It shows their emotional side and my feelings about them.
Yukarıdaki parçaya göre, öğrenci yazısını gözden geçirirken ne yapmaktadır?
A) She is completely changing her chosen animal.
B) She is adding new information and personal feelings to make her writing more detailed and reflective.
C) She is only checking for grammar mistakes in her text.
D) She is deciding not to write about elephants anymore.