I wrote a short paragraph about different healthy food types for my class yesterday. Today, I'm reading it again. I wrote: 'Apples are good. Carrots are good. Milk is good.' Hmm, it's a bit too simple. I think I should add more details. Maybe I can explain *why* apples are good for us, or *how* carrots help our eyes. And I should use more interesting words, not just 'good' all the time. I want my writing to be more descriptive.
Öğrenci, yazısını yeniden okurken hangi tür bir iyileştirme yapmayı düşünmektedir?
A) Making the writing simpler.
B) Adding more details and descriptive words.
C) Changing the topic completely.
D) Deleting all the healthy food types.