Can wrote a short report for his 'History of Art' class about Renaissance artists. His teacher commented: 'The information is all there, but the sequence of ideas in this paragraph is a bit confusing. Try to organize it more logically.'
Can'ın yazdığı paragraf şu şekildedir:
"Michelangelo was a genius, known for his sculptures like David and paintings like the frescoes in the Sistine Chapel. Many Renaissance artists also focused on humanism. Leonardo da Vinci, another key figure, was a polymath who excelled in painting, sculpture, architecture, music, science, invention, anatomy, geology, cartography, botany, and writing. He painted the Mona Lisa. The Renaissance period saw a great revival in art and learning after the Middle Ages. This era began in Italy."
Can, öğretmeninin geri bildirimine göre içeriği nasıl yeniden düzenlemelidir?
A) He should organize it chronologically according to the artists' birth dates.
B) He should first describe the Renaissance period generally, then present prominent artists and their works with examples.
C) He should write a separate paragraph for each artist.
D) He should only describe the works of Michelangelo and Leonardo da Vinci in more detail.
E) He should move the concept of humanism to the end of the paragraph.