Emre wrote a description of his cousin, Selin, including both her physical appearance and personality. His English teacher, Ms. Clark, provided feedback on the organization of his paragraph.
Emre's original paragraph: "Selin has long, dark hair and always wears a cheerful smile. She is very energetic and loves outdoor sports. Her eyes are bright and brown. She is also incredibly kind and supportive to her friends. Selin is of medium height and has an athletic physique."
Ms. Clark's feedback: "Emre, your descriptions of Selin are very good! However, the paragraph would be much clearer and easier to follow if you grouped the physical appearance descriptions together and then presented the personality traits. Try to reorganize it!"
Emre, Ms. Clark'ın geri bildirimine göre metnini en etkili şekilde nasıl yeniden düzenlemelidir?
A) Delete all sentences about Selin's personality and focus only on her physical appearance.
B) Start a new paragraph for each sentence to make it easier to read.
C) Arrange the sentences so that all descriptions of physical appearance are presented first, followed by all descriptions of personality traits.
D) Add more details about Selin's hobbies to make the paragraph longer.
E) Change some adjectives to synonyms to improve vocabulary.