Deniz wrote a reflection about the importance of family support during difficult times. His teacher provided feedback on a particular sentence:
Original Sentence:
"When I was having a hard time last year with my schoolwork and also feeling stressed, my family was really supportive and helped me to get through it."
Teacher's Feedback:
"This sentence is a bit long and could be more impactful. Can you express the same idea more concisely?"
Deniz, öğretmeninin geri bildirimine göre cümlesini daha kısa ve etkili hale getirmek için hangi revizyonu yapmalıdır?
A) Last year, when school was tough, my family was supportive.
B) My family always helps me when I am stressed and struggle with schoolwork.
C) During a challenging academic year, my family's unwavering support was crucial for my resilience.
D) I had a hard year at school, but my family helped me.
E) My family is very supportive when I'm stressed about school.