Maria wrote an essay describing her ideal house and its surroundings. Her teacher gave her the following feedback: "Your description of the house's interior is vivid, but the connection between the house and the garden/neighbourhood feels a bit weak. Try to integrate them more fluidly. Also, check for repetitive vocabulary."
Maria'nın bu geri bildirime dayanarak yapması gereken en uygun sonraki adım hangisidir?
A) Ignore the feedback about the garden and focus only on checking vocabulary.
B) Rewrite the entire essay from scratch without considering the original content.
C) Add new sentences that explain how the house and its garden/neighbourhood interact, and replace some overused words.
D) Ask a friend to write the missing parts about the garden and neighbourhood for her.
E) Submit the essay without any changes, believing her original work is perfect.