Mr. Johnson reviewed Leo's persuasive essay about the benefits of extracurricular activities. His written feedback included: "Your arguments are strong, Leo, and you've provided good evidence. However, your conclusion simply restates your introduction without offering any new insights or a strong final thought. Think about leaving the reader with something impactful."
Mr. Johnson'ın geri bildirimi, Leo'dan yazısında özellikle hangi bölümü ve nasıl düzenlemesini istemektedir?
A) To add more arguments to his body paragraphs.
B) To completely remove the conclusion from his essay.
C) To revise his introduction to make it more engaging.
D) To refine his conclusion to offer new insights or a strong final thought, rather than just restating the introduction.
E) To check for spelling and grammar errors throughout the essay.