Sarah has just received feedback from her English teacher on her essay about 'My Favorite School Subject'. The teacher's comments include: "Good analysis of the subject, Sarah! However, your introduction could be more engaging, and some paragraphs lack clear topic sentences. Also, try to use a wider range of vocabulary to avoid repetition."
Sarah bu geri bildirime göre yazısını geliştirmek için öncelikle ne yapmalıdır?
A) Start writing a completely new essay on a different topic.
B) Focus on improving her introduction, ensuring clear topic sentences for paragraphs, and enriching her vocabulary.
C) Ask a friend to rewrite the parts the teacher mentioned.
D) Ignore the comments and submit the essay again as it is.
E) Only correct any minor grammar mistakes without addressing the main points.