The teacher returned Sarah's argumentative essay with the following general comment: "Your arguments are strong, but the connection between your main points sometimes gets lost. Try to strengthen the transitions and ensure each paragraph clearly supports your thesis statement."
Öğretmenin bu geri bildirimi Sarah'nın yazısını geliştirmek için ne yapması gerektiğini işaret etmektedir?
A) Research more evidence to support her arguments, regardless of existing connections.
B) Add a new paragraph with a completely different argument to broaden the essay.
C) Reorganize her paragraphs and use more effective transition phrases to logically link ideas.
D) Focus only on correcting grammar and punctuation mistakes.
E) Reduce the number of examples in each paragraph to simplify the text.