Student's draft introduction:
'This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of living in a city compared to living in the countryside. Both have good and bad points.'
Feedback 1 (Teacher): 'Your introduction is functional but lacks an engaging hook to draw the reader in. Also, your thesis statement (the main argument) could be more specific about *what* benefits and drawbacks you'll focus on.'
Feedback 2 (Peer): 'Maybe you could start with a personal anecdote about visiting both places?'
Öğrenci, verilen geri bildirimleri dikkate alarak, giriş paragrafını geliştirmek için atması gereken en önemli ilk adım nedir?
A) Immediately start brainstorming personal anecdotes without considering the thesis.
B) Delete the entire introduction and write a completely new one from scratch.
C) Focus on making the existing thesis statement more specific and adding a captivating hook.
D) Only address the peer's suggestion by adding a personal story.
E) Ignore both feedback points as the introduction is already 'functional.'