Student's Draft Sentence:
"Many people choose to live in the city because of the jobs."
Teacher's Feedback:
"Be more specific here. What kind of jobs? What makes them attractive in the city compared to the countryside?"
Öğretmenin "Be more specific here" şeklindeki geri bildirimi, öğrencinin yazısını geliştirmek için ne yapması gerektiğini ima etmektedir?
A) To remove the sentence entirely as it is too vague.
B) To add more detailed information, such as types of jobs available or the economic opportunities unique to urban areas.
C) To rephrase the sentence using synonyms for 'many' and 'jobs'.
D) To check for grammatical errors in the sentence and correct them.
E) To move this sentence to a different paragraph where it might fit better.