Maria wrote a descriptive paragraph about a rainforest ecosystem. Her teacher commented: "Your description is vivid, Maria, but some sentences are repetitive, and your vocabulary could be more varied. Try to use stronger verbs and more precise adjectives to paint a clearer picture." Maria made some initial changes, but she feels her paragraph still isn't as impactful as it could be.
Maria, içeriğini yinelemeli olarak daha da iyileştirmek için hangi adımı atmalıdır?
A) She should immediately submit the paragraph without any further changes.
B) She should read her paragraph aloud to identify awkward phrasing and repetitive words, then revise again.
C) She should ask her friend to only check for punctuation errors.
D) She should completely ignore the vocabulary feedback and stick to her original words.
E) She should focus only on making her sentences longer, not on word choice.