Tom received peer feedback on his research paper about 'Future Technologies for Space Exploration.' His classmate wrote: 'Your section on "Advanced Propulsion Systems" is very detailed, but it feels like some parts about how humans would adapt to these systems are mixed in with the technical details. Maybe separate these two ideas for better flow.'
Akran geri bildirimini göz önünde bulunduran Tom, yazılı içeriğini yeniden düzenlemek için ne yapmalıdır?
A) Delete the parts about human adaptation entirely.
B) Create a new subsection specifically for 'Human Adaptation to Propulsion Systems' and move relevant sentences there.
C) Change the title of the 'Advanced Propulsion Systems' section.
D) Argue with his classmate that the current organization is fine.
E) Add more technical details to the 'Advanced Propulsion Systems' section.