Sema wrote a sentence about her uncle in her essay describing family members:
"My uncle is a kind person. He is always happy and makes everyone laugh."
Her teacher's feedback was: "This is a good start, Sema, but 'kind' and 'happy' are general. How does your uncle *show* he is kind? What *specifically* makes him happy or makes others laugh? Can you add more vivid details or an example?"
Öğretmeninin geri bildirimine göre, Sema hangi cümleyi en iyi şekilde revize etmiştir?
A) My uncle is very kind and happy.
B) My uncle, with his infectious smile and quick wit, always tells funny stories that brighten everyone's day, and he frequently volunteers to help neighbors, showing his genuine kindness.
C) My uncle is a nice man and he laughs a lot.
D) My uncle likes to tell jokes and he is friendly to people.
E) My uncle's personality is kind and happy, and he is a good person.