Mark has revised his essay describing his grandfather's physical appearance and personality based on initial feedback. He has made his descriptions more vivid and separated appearance from personality into different paragraphs. Now, he receives new feedback: 'Your descriptions are much clearer, but I still don't get a strong sense of *who* your grandfather is as a whole person. Try to make the connection between his gentle eyes and his kind personality more explicit. Also, consider adding a short anecdote that showcases both aspects.'
Mark, yeni geri bildirim ışığında yazısını daha da iyileştirmek için en uygun adım hangisidir?
A) Add more adjectives to describe his grandfather's clothes.
B) Delete the paragraph about his grandfather's personality to make it shorter.
C) Incorporate a brief story or example that illustrates how his grandfather's appearance (e.g., gentle eyes) reflects his personality (e.g., kindness).
D) Only focus on correcting grammatical errors in his current draft.
E) Rewrite the entire essay from scratch, ignoring previous drafts.