Can wrote about his older brother, Mert. His classmate, Zeynep, read his draft and gave him some feedback.
Can's original paragraph: "Mert is a very kind person. He always tries to help others. He is also quite determined. If he sets a goal, he works hard to achieve it. He has a muscular build."
Zeynep's feedback: "Can, your description of Mert's personality is good, but you could make it more convincing. When you say he 'tries to help others,' can you give a specific example? And for 'determined,' maybe a short anecdote?"
Zeynep'in geri bildirimini en etkili şekilde uygulamak için Can, metnini nasıl yeniden düzenlemeli veya iyileştirmelidir?
A) Move the sentence "He has a muscular build" to the beginning of the paragraph.
B) Add a sentence like: "For instance, last week he spent hours helping me with my math homework even though he was tired."
C) Change "He is also quite determined" to "He is remarkably persistent."
D) Delete the sentence "If he sets a goal, he works hard to achieve it."
E) Ask Zeynep to write an example for him.